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Something I had published from 2013
I see flaws, I would appreciate comments back as I work the universe I created here into a new book
If you find it unreadable, tell me so and offer up a why
I thank you
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aPx7t-d6GuV8IX5AoUz8w0HWkyjmdm3BXLIvJaKpV58/edit
@artbyhobo thank you
you should now be a commenter for the story, let me know otherwise
@steelhoof i sent an access request, my email is the same as my username. im happy to take a look!