@iaincmgray context? lyrics, or written piece? Without further context, I think "It was" weakens the whole thing.
"The shadows here held sway, illimitable dominion over all."
(ok, that last part was Poe). 😁
@silent_dystopia: Linking to Poe is good.
It's a line of prose from the novella I'm working on.
It's horror, obvs.
@silent_dystopia: I'm just a happier wee person when I'm doing something creative.