@Bliss lots of competing messages, streamline the focus, give a one sentence tx to Joe Biden then dig into Kamala and the change

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👍 The only thing I have issue with and it's a small issue is the mention of affordable healthcare. I want universal healthcare but that may not happen during my lifetime.

@Bliss It’s very busy, and long.

@Bliss too long. too over the top. too many competing msgs. focus on what biden & kamala accomplished together then move on to why vote kamala. msgs are getting lost when you do too much. simple. streamlined. consistent.

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@Bliss the bridge theme is good, the generational shift was one of the reasons I thought Biden should’ve left before he did. But the piece is too long. Keep it simple: introduction, main message, and a call to action. The Biden/Harris administration is successful, Harris will continue to “build back better” if she has your vote, register, bring a friend, and vote like your future depends on it. It does. 60 seconds and out.