**backsaw - я українець** @[email protected] · Mar 27, 2024, 02:48

**backsaw - я українець** @[email protected] · Mar 27, 2024, 02:48

backsaw - я українець @[email protected]

Bright Check Engine Light
On a moonlit road in spring
Just let me get home

(Got home)

**David supports Ukraine** @[email protected] · Mar 27, 2024, 11:33

**David supports Ukraine** @[email protected] · Mar 27, 2024, 11:33

David supports Ukraine @[email protected]

@b4cks4w very nice. Would you consider removing "in spring" and "Just"?

**backsaw - я українець** @[email protected] · 2024-03-27T11:35:28Z

backsaw - я українець @[email protected]

@DavidKMresists sure, have at it. Was going for 17 syllables but I'm a haiku free spirit.

**David supports Ukraine** @[email protected] · Mar 27, 2024, 13:06

**David supports Ukraine** @[email protected] · Mar 27, 2024, 13:06

David supports Ukraine @[email protected]

@b4cks4w I am not against 17-syllable haiku, but sometimes less is more.