I have now sent my nephew the constructive comments necessary to help him rethink this essay.
But my favourite part was when I got to his Works Cited section (reader: he cited no works in the main text) and saw that the *very first piece* contradicted his argument about women as "natural" nurturers. ๐ He didn't read it, clearly.
What I was thinking the entire time?
His mum was *not* a nurturer at first. But do I say that to her sprog? ๐ค Nope! I just talked essay techniques.
๐ Now to record.